This is fantastic writing! Already, I think the prince hates my gut, yet, at least I've made friends with Mei Mei and possible, Tigress??? I don't know if the purity is default to 100 or not, but I'm clearly a saint, a purity of a 100 and surpassed the prince. (I won 2 rounds but apparently I got my ass beat in the finals, I'm easily forgiven the people in the game, sticking to a virtuous route here!) I easily forgiven my father Wu! Although I question his development in the story, I wanna predict he will actually be proud for once if we succeed the material arts and become the as strongest clan? So far, I'm weak AF, but my agility saved my ass during the 2 rounds I've mentioned earlier. ＼(°o°)／ whoa, Mei Mei, can we be more than just friends, is this my first love of the same sex? Wow, I think I'm in love! ( ꈍᴗꈍ) Even if she's the sister of that jerk, ugh! 😩
ヽ(｡◕o◕｡)ﾉ. OMG, she's adorable, l beg for more updates! I will definitely beat the prince one day! In the kindest way possible.
Sounds like the average ending of a xianxia novel, if not a god we will just find out that there are world creating god beings, and beings above those, and then some more being above those still, and we will eventually find that there is yet another unexplored level beyond. xD
This game was amazing!! I loved the story and all the different choices you can make. I love the gameplay mechanics. This game clearly had lots of blood, sweat, and tears put into. I hope it doesn't get dropped *knocks on wood*. I am definitely looking forward to the next update!
I must I am a disappointed for 39 days one month and some that's this is all the new update has it has no story to add in the plot and instead of the mc getting stronger he is weaker he is getting more damage in the arena like what the hell at this point I don't feel I like the mc is not the mc because everyone can beat him like he is an ant and you make fim fear persons you should make him not afraid of anyone even if the are way more powerful than him and when are you planning on make the mc the most powerful being in the game like hit someone like the monkey king and it kill him like he is notting i cant wait because the mc is too weak for too long😠😠😠
Hi @NickyDicky will POVs ever be on the free demo? Or are they only exclusive for patreons? Because not everyone has money laying around, and it's so sad not to see the povs of our favourite ro's. Maybe a Christmas release?
I became a child of the Demon Queen by accident. Highly recommend!
By the way the plot is amazing. The twist litteraly shocked me and some of the moments made me so excited that I barely stayed in place. MCs choices are actually well fitted and I had a really good time playing this demo. Can't wait for next updates! ♥️
Really loving the game, though I would like to say my piece. The hardest mode is cool, not that hard though, until you get to the qi part. When we achieve that part of the game, the difficult spike like hell. Qi is not very easy to manage, it is hard to get, and too costly to use. You need to use it for everything that you want to do, for talents, to upgrade your attributes cap, to use the golden seed. And about the golden seed, to make martial arts invalidated in an Xianxia/Wuxia media is kinda of bad, even more with how unbalanced the current system is. The experience you get is also very low. All in all, I loving the game, but belive it can be amazing with some changes.
Wow, this game is so damn good, the only way to praise it is to curse it!!!, I love the freedom that exists and you can even do that haha e.e, of course, I recommend increasing the difficulty of the game, don't get me wrong, it's fun to hit left and right every guy you meet, but after a while you get addicted to it, finally I curse He Mei, never trust a He!I hope there is an event where I can take my life, because of him I can't use the alchemy and I have to use my brain to become strong o.o
Late game really needs rebalancing for Mortal difficulty. Several of the checks need advance knowledge to pass, or unreasonable Qi expenditures early on (restaurant event with spear twin moment), and Arena fights feel nearly impossible even after the auction. I had to resort to legendaries (Demonic Overlord/Paragon of Virtue) to get the necessary XP; idk how I would get to the end of the game otherwise.
Regarding the arena specifically you basically spend double what you gain to heal from fights afterwards so you're always operating a net loss. Could be easily fixed by saying the sect heals you from arena fights and having your health reset to full after each fight.
Also regarding balance, the infirmary is insanely expensive compared to healing talismans and cleansing organs doesn't actually remove the amount you're spending in contribution points.
Also there may be a bunch of kills you don't get Qi for. I recall killing the opponent in the Ruo event and not getting awarded any.
Still of the opinion Qi should be reworked as well. The idea is nice but damn man I want to use my techniques without having to dedicate a whole legendary trait to it (Martial Sovereign). Or be able to regenerate without bonking my stat pool.
Are you playing on Earth/Heavenly/Story difficulties or cheating? Cuz there are several attacks that are unavoidable if you don't use Qi, and even sometimes if you DO use Qi, or pass the stat check, and you can't be spending Qi on techniques if you're playing on mortal you need every stat increase u can get your hands on.
And yes some stuff still uses Qi even with Martial Sovereign. Infusion, golden barriers, qi infused punches, regeneration, etc. Only space/body/elemental attacks dont consume qi with that trait.
I was just joking xD but actually i think i died like one or two times because of fights. Everytime i either destroyed them or in the "end game" (i remember the ninjas or something) barely scraped by. I played on mortal and i dont know if im lucky or something but i had full stats almost the whole time. I had a talent for perception 100%. I also got the Demon Queen worm or whatever that was that boosted my stats. Pretty easy 😎
demon queen worm makes str and agi like 9999 in exchange for perma health losses. I suggest you try out the game without legendary traits and without using artifacts like dq worm and the power gloves to understand more of what i'm talking about
Okay when I'm using a skill umm ability??? Like Celestial shield or void leap... I press some of this things and then I die I don't why and I'm so confused and I don't know what to do?? Do I have to do something or it just happens
It only happens on story mode I think I don't know I play story mode all the time so... I don't know it's a bug or a feature
Have you noticed your hp? It's definitely not a feature. Celestia shield (protect) and void leap (evade). It definitely can't kill you. It should keep us alive, not dead. It might be a bug but I don't have any problems.
The saddest thing is that no one compliment our FemaleMC/Princess Wu lan as otherworldly beauty or hot female. Prince Tang Ruo has a lot of female disciples simp, but our FemaleMC/Princess Wu lan doesn't have any male disciples simp. Poor FemaleMC/Princess Wu lan.
I am dieing for the next update but I am so disappointed in the mc power he is supposed to be a God but mare mortal can harm him the mc need to become overpowered because he is so weak please make mc powerful I am playing in god mode and i feel like i am playing in normal mode
It's a shame that our FemaleMC is beautiful as otherworldly beauty but no one compliments our FemaleMC. People say Wu Lan sell herself to our Dragon waifu Before the auction starts and People compliment our Dragon waifu (she's f*cking hot -from outer disciples or inner disciples I don't know). I feel sorry for her. I'm sure she's much more beautiful than every female characters. There are still some noble who like Tigress, but our FemaleMC doesn't have any. What is the cause? Poor Wu Lan. No one compliment our FemaleMC. Only got punched and teeth fell out but the teeth kept coming back. No one is interested in the beauty of our FemaleMC. At first I thought both men and women will scream at our FemaleMC otherworldly beauty and body hourglass figure like Fubuki from One Punch Man......Even Fu Bing isn't interested in raping our FemaleMC After poisoning our FemaleMC. What a waste of otherworldly beauty lol.
After the full game release I'm sure every misspelled words in this game will be corrected. And Full Game definitely free Because NickyDicky earn $750/month And it is possible to earn more than $850 after the full version Release. the game won't end easily and It's possible to have more than 1000 episodes Because the game potential is too great lol. This is The best story game I've ever played. I'll wait for the full version.
The main character's body explodes is the ending, right? We have to wait until it updates, right? I chose blurry stone and death. I've been looking for a game like this for a long time, Finally. even if I have to wait another 10 years until the story ends, if I don't die first, I'll download it and play. But for now, I'm going to go back and play the male character's storyline. I am bored of normal nsfw. If this game has NSFW Just a little bit would be good. The story is very interesting. Really interesting. I have never played a game this fun. The writer of the story is really excellent. I wish there were sex scenes sometimes. This game is not a normal game since it has a dark story and our father have sex with half of the insect. Including milf.
To be honest, I don't know anything about this game. But I love it. I downloaded it 1 day ago because I accidentally pressed download. I don't know if the body explode is the end or not, but I went back and selected every stone and all died.
You have to get rid of the 99,999 Failures. You can either throw it away, or if you beat Long Chen you can use it on him before choosing the stones. You exploding is not the end of the game, the bomb just explodes in your spatial ring.
Thank you so much! The protagonist/the main character has no plot armor at all. Got a new body but died from the explosion. Our protagonist has almost no role in the battle with Long Chen. Long Chen was like the main character, but he wasn't. He killed guo.
Thanks again. I finished playing the demo. The main female character is friend with a prince after our FemaleMC saved his life but I would prefer our FemaleMC to be the prince's wife. Have at least 3 children before going to another world Lol. I am sure we can choose our husband/wife in the future update.
I am playing as a female yet in the beginning in the dialogue for when we are 13 and trying to get the Divine Water Herb when asking whether He Gang could leave a few stalks for us on the 7th line the woman said “Brother Gang, this moron is harassing me. Get rid of him” rather than ‘her’
Tang Ruo puts her arm on the back of your head and flips himself(herself) over your charging body. She taps your spine with her foot, causing you to stumble.
At last, you feel it. Feel the power that truly separates the mortals from those who have ascended beyong(beyond)
He Jun shouts as his body erupts with an unimaginable /for your/ speed.
You glance towards Tang Ruo, yet she appears unbothered by the corpses, save for a slight aversion in his(her) countenance.
You dig it into(in) and the taste of what seems(seemed, at first,) like plain rice amazes you.
We don’t how she does this(it), but her rice is ten time(times) better than if any of us tried to cook the same dish.”
Suddenly, as (though) becoming shy, she turns away her head(turns her head, looks away,) and scratches her ear.
Noticing you, injured yet eager to come to her aid, Ai smiles a small, barely noticeable, yet /the most/ sincere smile, before /she/ resolutely shakes(shaking) her head.
Ai yells, the indignant in her washing away the guilt(the indignity she felt washing away the guilt)
“But? without strength they? matter not.”(“but, without strength… they matter not.”)
“So, what it is(is it) you’re saying? That those without power have no use at all?”
Not if you (want) to make sure that something like today doesn’t happen again.
And you are (far) from being the only one. Unlike its usual state, with only a few dozen(dozens) of disciples watching or participating in the fights, the Arena now is(is currently) almost half-full — an astounding turnout, probably the highest it has even(ever) been for an Early-Houtian contender.
You spot Jing Guo, obviously tense and uncomfortable, squirm in his chair. ➡️ (visibly tense and uncomfortable, squirming in his chair.)
He withstands the blow, not cut or injured, but is pushed back a dozen of steps. ➡️ (He withstands the blow without being cut or injured, but is forcefully pushed back a dozen steps.)
“Not bad. In your stage, you’re probably unrivaled(unmatched/unparalleled). But against me, it’s (still) far from enough.”
Tang Ruo is obviously present, sitting closed-eyes on her flying sword. ➡️ (Tang Ruo is unmistakably present, seated with closed eyes on her flying sword.)
Whether others are too afraid of her, her wild demeanor too intense for them to handle, or her loneliness is a display of disciples’ contempt for her origin, you do not know. ➡️ (It’s unclear whether others fear her, find her intense wild demeanor too daunting, or if her solitude reflects the disdain for her origins among the disciples.)
There also Jing Guo and Yuan Fang, conversing with each other about some matters. ➡️ (There’s also Jing Guo and Yuan Fang, deep in conversation about some topic or another.)
Dozens of feet in length, with dark red carcass and tens of tiny little legs crawling at its sides. Two thick, long tentacle-like whiskers spread out from its face and six black as the void itself eyes stare straight into your very soul. Hissing, but with the sheer volume of its voice the noise more resembles a growl, the giant centipede raises a third of its body, its skeleton unnaturally nimble, and charges straight at you. ➡️ (Several feet in length, with a dark red exoskeleton and numerous tiny legs scuttling at its sides. Two thick, long tentacle-like whiskers extend from its face, and six eyes as black as the void gaze into your soul. Emitting a hiss that resembles more of a growl due to its sheer volume, the giant centipede raises a third of its body with unnatural agility and charges directly at you.)
“The lizard kid and the Whore Chao’s daughter are the only, one(ones) with some amount of guts.”
Yang Bohai then carefully studies your group with his dangerous, bloodthirsty gaze. You hear gulps all around you, even see some disciples go weak in the knees — and when the Elder’s eyes meet yours, your understand why. ➡️ (Yang Bohai carefully studies your group with his dangerous, bloodthirsty gaze. You hear gulps all around you, and see some disciples go weak in the knees — when the Elder’s eyes meet yours, you understand why.)
There’s nothing inside them but death. But blood, gore and suffering. All people have a scent, and this old man smells of murder. ➡️ (There’s nothing inside them but death, blood, gore, and suffering. Everyone has a scent, and this old man reeks of murder.)
No ones dares to speak either. His loud, thunderous voice has already been enough, the hint of something utterly wicked in his tone makes your skin crawl in terror. ➡️ (No one dares to speak. His loud, thunderous voice alone is enough; the hint of something utterly wicked in his tone makes your skin crawl in terror.)
Smartly, you decide to keep silent: talking back to man like that sounds painful. ➡️ (Wisely, you choose to remain silent; talking back to a man like that seems like it would be painful.)
Alongside a massive bomb of terrible destruction. Are you truly planning on using it, damning both your Senior Brother, who now sits with a peaceful expression, and your fellow disciples to certain death for no fault of their own? ➡️ (Alongside a massive bomb of terrible destruction, are you truly planning to use it, condemning both your Senior Brother, now sitting with a peaceful expression, and your fellow disciples to certain death for no fault of their own?)
First of(off), this Danger Zone is quite… strange.
If some of you have seconds(are having second) thoughts, I can crush your skulls right now to rid you of them.
We’ve already sent a few dozen disciples back(in). Two of them even came back, so quit whining.
You look forward, towards dozens of disciples sitting cross-legged, in total mental felicity, before a young man with a zither in his hands. His long, thin fingers carefully caress the instrument’s strings and he lets out a blindingly charming smile. His features are already too pretty for a man — big, expressive blue eyes, full, thick crimson lips and long lashes that flopped with every blink — yet now, with a cute dimple on the left side of his mouth, he appears unnaturally comely. ➡️ (You look ahead to find dozens of disciples sitting cross-legged, in complete mental serenity, gathered around a young man skillfully playing a zither. His long, slender fingers delicately caress the strings of the instrument as he flashes a blindingly charming smile. His features are strikingly beautiful for a man — with big, expressive blue eyes, full, thick crimson lips, and long lashes that flutter with every blink. The addition of a cute dimple on the left side of his mouth makes him appear unnaturally handsome.)
And when you think it’s all there is, just a pretty, androgynous youth, comes the voice. The most ethereal, the most angelic voice you’ve ever heard. A voice that grips your heart, that gently forces you to listen and refuses to let go of its hold until its finished. ➡️ (And just when you think he’s merely a pretty, androgynous youth, his voice emerges. It’s the most ethereal, the most angelic voice you’ve ever heard. A voice that grips your heart, gently compelling you to listen, refusing to release its hold until it’s finished.)
You approach the group of Martial Artists you noticed before. A couple of disciples from your own sect are already there, drinking tea as they jubilantly tell each other stories. ➡️ (You approach the group of Martial Artists you had noticed earlier. A couple of disciples from your own sect are already there, sipping tea and jubilantly exchanging stories with each other.)
Does (the) name Zhong Zhi ring a bell?
Treat it as (the) senseless ramblings of your Senior Brother.
I’ve seen far too many fellow disciples die to lack caution. ➡️ (Zones are chaotic, dangerous, and unpredictable. I’ve witnessed too many fellow disciples perish due to a lack of caution.)
The demonic disciples stop a hundred yards from the spot of your gathering and their hungry gazes start judging you with a(an) intensity that lacks any notion of restraint.
One man, in particular, stands out. Pale skin, sick countenance, white hair and crimson, blood-colored eyes: when his gaze lazily finds yours, your body freezes. Deep in your soul, you feel primal, instinctual fear. This man is a predator, one that stands at the apex of natural food chain. And you, to him, is nothing but a helpless pray. ➡️ (One man stands out in particular: pale skin, a sickly countenance, white hair, and eyes the color of crimson blood. When his gaze lazily meets yours, your body freezes. Deep within your soul, you feel primal, instinctual fear. This man is a predator, standing at the apex of the natural food chain. To him, you are nothing but helpless prey.)
He leans back, grinning an ugly grin, and you, unwittingly, breathe out in relief. Now that you can think again, you realize you recognize him: he’s titled, a rarity among those who haven’t undergone their Second Rebirth, the Young Blood Hunter: his name founded in him hunting, and slaying, thousands of Martial Artists just like you. ➡️ (He leans back, grinning an ugly grin, and unwittingly, you exhale in relief. Now that you can think again, you realize you recognize him: he’s titled, a rarity among those who haven’t undergone their Second Rebirth, the Young Blood Hunter — renowned for hunting down and slaying thousands of Martial Artists like you.)
The air around you is hot and moist, as sterling(pristine) as only uninhibited land can be. But it’s not just pureness you feel when you breathe.(Yet, it’s not just purity you sense when you breathe.)
A quick look around confirms that you’re alone, with no one else to share your discovery with. An eventuality you were prepared with(for), but one that makes you…
… /are/ indifferent.
… /are/ relieved.
… /are/ excited.
… /are/ nervous.
… /are/ disappointed.
Her/His answers only confuse you further, but you understand that the woman/man already does her/his (best) to communicate in a language she/he obviously isn’t fluent in.
His empyrean is much /more/ better sounding
The old man waves, causing all the bows and /the/ spears to be lowered /down/ .
The world we(we’re) in , it’s(is) called the Endless Jungle Realm.
These outsiders are to be called Apostles of the Heavens. Because that’s who they are and that’s what their purpose it(is).
No more words are needed(need) to be said — let the battle begin.
But out(our) time is very limited, Apostle. Scriptures say that after your arrival into the world, you’ll have about two months to assemble the key, before terrible things /will/ begin to happen.”
Please, Brother(Sister) Ming Yue, you flatter me too much. The difference between us is vast and unsurmountable, enough to form a sea of inequality.
Similar to you, another Martial Artist have(has) taken control of the natives, a man named Fu Bing.
For a moment, you delve into your memory, trying to figure out why(what) caused the girl to behave this way, and realization comes to you soon after.
Your sibling lowers her head, and a pink blush appears on her cheeks, before she agitatedly clenches (her) fists and replies.
Her words, however, are interrupted by (the) startling ringing of a bell.
instead of the houses you spent your days walking (in), there are burning, smoking structures of wood (…) and instead of that fresh, pure air there is a rotten smell of blood and death.
because the sight of corpses that riddles(riddle) the intimately known streets rids(rid) you of your ability to think.
“Don’t come close!” — she yells, but breathing(breaths) out in relief after recognizing you.
There, she suddenly removes one of the wooden planks in the walls, revealing a large, (previously) concealed /before/, compartment.
It doesn’t take long for the owner of the voice to found(find) your family.
He smiles, wickedly and lewdly, as he stares at the women. ➡️ (His wicked, lewd smile lingers as his gaze fixates unsettlingly on the women.)
he swings his ax, embedding the weapon into your only parent’s skull, freezing her terrified and beginning(pleading) expression (upon her wrinkled face…) forever.
Your sister shrieks, (a) piercing, eardrum shattering sound full of emotion, and runs to your mother’s body.
How did this happen? How did a sunny, happy day turned(turn) into this? How? Why?…
one that you bought and trained in secret, one that you hoped would be your trump car(card)
Good. Leave alone(me be) for now, I need to figure some things out.
That burned, disfigured face /it/ still the same
The disciple of the Omniscient Sage has also poured tea, a kind of it that you don’t recognize but with a fragrance that makes you want to take long, deep whiff.(you do not recognize the herb used, but the tea’s fragrance makes you want to take a long, deep whiff.)
In fact, the only remaining sign of her previous poor state are(is) her (torn clothes, still) stained with blood.
The Princess seems (distant) from her usual self: you are used to her being a lofty, almost otherworldly figure that (would) never put anyone in her eyes .(;) but now, with her unable to control her anger and frustration, the princess is much more human-like(appears far more… human).
You wonder just how badly did Long Chen humiliate her(Long Chen humiliated her), for the imperial heir to be this irritable.
In the battles on that level(a battle of that scale), few minutes is a lot of time.
“Desire for knowledge and respect for those who has(have) it are essential for any educated, civilized man. Doesn’t Princess agree?”
as (though) it was king, and everything else in the world its servant.
He tilts his head (,)amusingly(amused) instead (,) and smiles a (confident,) light (smile.)/, but confident smile./
The two lock(locked)/their/ gazes, /with/ neither budging nor escalating the argument further.
sighs (,) and sits down, palming
For many, the princess had to explain the purpose of both to you and Xiwen. The effects make you salivate. ➡️ (Many of the artifacts required explanation for both you and Xiwen, and the princess graciously obliged. The effects of said artifacts could almost make you salivate.)
A pair of earring(earrings) that allows its wearers to communicate with nothing but their thoughts.
Boots (that) enhance your speed two-fold.
“Well, will(with) all of this, we can definitely take Long Chen on”
Although with the Princess’s riches we have a strong possibility of winning. However, our opponent this time is not an ordinary top-tier Peak-Houtian. ➡️ (Although the princess’s riches give us a strong possibility of winning, our opponent this time is not an ordinary toptier PeakHoutian.)
There are many in our stage who can do it(so).
Knowing that man, he will go (all) out from the start, not bothering to conserve his strength. I will do my best to exhaust his resources (,) and then, when I give a signal, I will paralyze him for a split second.
Just remember not to be seen beforehand, the effect(element) of surprise is imperative for our success.”
And now, when(with) her belly carried(carrying) your unborn child, (the) love you had(have) for your(her) has grown even further.
(While)It’s(it’s) true that she always has(has always) been inexpressive, which meant(made) her every gesture of affection that much more meaningful, but you(you still) certainly could not imagine her frowning at your exclamations.
The Blood King snaps his finger and the ground beneath you lits(lights) up
and knocked up (my) daughter.
And now, the third and final /is/ step
enough to leave them cripple(crippled) if not outright killed.
the chains bounding(binding) you
beside(besides) your wife dying in your arms
His fault that you lived the last decade on a(the) run, like a pathetic criminal.
When you’re finally done and the man who used to haunt (you)/during both/ day and night is but a pile of scattered meat, you collapse.
Nothing is impossible, everything is withing(within) the realm of possibility.
Your wife, child (,) and sister dead?
He was never one to be humble, but (right) now he seems much more(even) cockier than usual.
but your Senior Brother looks as if the outcome of today was already set in stone and no one could a change (it) even if they tried.
Flesh regrows on /the/ your lookalike’s skeleton in a matter of seconds, not leaving behind even a scar.
Her freakish, long nails dig into your eyes, her teeth biting hard into your shoulder. ➡️ (Her freakishly long nails dig into your eyes as her teeth bite hard into your shoulder.)
One chews your flesh and gouges your sight, viciously tearing you apart in (an) animalistic fashion.
Thankfully, the rest of the disciples is(are) occupied by your ally and you can focus on Ai and Tigress instead.
but the poor girl doesn’t know yet just how big you(your) gains have been during this expedition.
He’s thrown to the ground, with covered in blood Long Chen standing above him.(above him stands Long Chen, covered in blood.)
Xiwen, (with) his beautiful face ruining(littered)by bruises(with bruises), smiles. There are(Some of his) teeth (are) missing, you notice, but he doesn’t seem to care. Instead, his earring flashes red and he spreads out his hands(arms).
A golden, winged figure rushes through the sky at (a) terrifying speed
Humanoid in shape, yet covered /in/ head to toe in glistening scales .(, and) wielding a familiar /to you/ majestic sword with blood dripping from its blade.
Long Chen’s head on the ground, unattached to(detached from) his body, and with a frozen expression of disbelief(disbelief frozen upon his face).
“The fact that someone as proud and quick-tempered as you attempts(is attempting) to negotiate for peace tells me all I need to know.”
She hasn’t explained to you the pill’s effect(the pill’s effects to you) either, but, assuming from(judging by) her words, it’s something that would allow you to participate in this battle.
The fluttering leaves, the flying (of the) insects, even the moments(movements) of (the) people around you has decreased their pace(have slowed) — it takes you a moment to adjust to your new, enhanced perception (,) and you wonder just how long it’ll last and what would be the(kind of) side-effects (will follow).
In attempts(an attempt) to retaliate, Long Chen swings his club around, but despite its might, the weapon is too slow
Long Chen, who before(previously would have) fiercely attacked with his club, suddenly stopped(stops). His whole body froze(freezing) as he stared(stares) somewhere in(into) the distance with a blank, empty look(expression).
Did the arrogant and honorable princess just used(use)… poison?
The mist of blood that (was) once /has been/ your Senior Brother condenses back into a human shape /again/ and Long Chen, naked as the day he was born, appears before you.
Upon contact with Long Chen’s skull, you don’t simply break through the broke(bone): such great might is hidden in your punch that your opponent’s head explodes under the impact of your hit.
Long Chen lifeless body falls to the ground, not a sign of life in his corpse. ➡️ (Long Chen’s body falls to the ground, lifeless.)
“Come, get up, we need to check if that monster if(is) finally dead.”
“Alright. Let’s make a deal then. You’ll hand over the stone and we’ll bound(bind) you with (an) Energy-suppressing rope. I will guarantee your safety.”
“I (can) depart to the underworld any time.”
but realizing the pointless(pointlessness) of it all, swallows his words.
When Long Chen came to you, offering /a/ five thousand gold to join his army, you refused.
A bum that lucked out and risen(rose) above his destined stature.
Taking on them all alone? ➡️ (Taking them all on alone?)
There’s a chance of her become someone important in the future. Which means, you’ll benefit a lot from ingraining yourself to her while that’s still a possibility. ➡️ (There’s a chance she’ll become someone important in the future, which means you’ll benefit a lot from ingratiating yourself to her while its still possible.)
but Tang Ruo wouldn’t even look at you twice. ➡️ (but Tang Ruo wouldn’t even look twice at you.)
She throws himself(herself) into the slaughter and spares no mercy.
Five, ten, fifteen – and then /a/ thirty more.
They activate their wondrous skills, use tactics and even resort to, out of necessity, to the use of under-handed means like means, yet Long Chen gets up time and time again. ➡️ (They activate their formidable skills, use tactics, and even resort to the use of under-handed means, out of necessity. Yet, Long Chen gets up time and time again.)
replaying in your head that punch again and again. ➡️ (unable to help mentally replaying that punch over and over again.)
How many worlds you’ve(have you) traversed to find them? How many enemies you’ve(have you) made after kidnapping daughters, sisters (,) and brides? How many wars you’ve(have you) waged (…)and how many lives you’ve taken to gather them all(how many lives have you taken to gather them all)?
Countless. And(Yet,) you don’t feel the slightest amount of remorse (,)Because(because), as you give these women a glance, you reassure yourself that all your actions have been worth it.
But… how can you exist in this world when she was not(isn’t) by your side?
What(All that) persists is anguish Unbearable agony as they scream out in agony(, and finally, their screams of unbearable agony echo around me…) How can they not, when all of them are burning alive?
You look up. You feel their anger. makes the sky darken and clouds full of thunder to form(The sky darkens, clouds form, and thunder rumbles — loudly echoing their fury). /And/ You Smirk. What can (the) Heavens do against a God?
As (the) women begin to slowly die(slowly begin to die), their quintessential energies (being) used to fuel your insanity of a(heretical)/(insane) plan, a portal starts to form.
but that would be akin to calling a sparkle from rubbing sticks a great wildfire. ➡️ (but that would be akin to equating a raging wild fire to a mere spark.)
“Will it damage his(hers)?” — you query, referring to the Princess.
“That’s a possibility, but I doubt it. To shatter arrogance as thick as his(hers), Long Chen’s club is not big enough.”
He walked forward as (if) he owned this entire world and, in a way, you realize he really did
(With his) Hands claspes(clasped) behind his back, Long Chen took(takes) heavy, firm steps. Hearing you approach, he turns his head and smiles (in a) friendly (manner).
Mental alignments(ailments) can get dangerous, if left untreated.
You used means I didn’t thought(never thought) you’d be willing to use.
Long Chen snorts, though you don’t (know) whether he does so at(due to) your naivety or out of(feeling) insult.
No. But, you’ve(have you) seen a masked disciple running around?
Long Chen pursues(purses) his lips
It’s not like I’m bursting with (the) desire to do so.
You think I’m willing to enter that snake(Snake’s) nest? Hell no.
Her unapologetic gaze drills you int(into you)
All your(you) need is to restore your qi and then bend the void to your will.
but you need you(the) fuel desperately and mortal ants are not good for anything else.
Only now (do) you know: your entire civilization (, to him,)is a merely(has merely been) a pig that he has fattened (for consumption) , and you yourself is(are) the main dish.
But you can’t let him see your weak(weakness).
To glance at her again and lose her, to watch myself stray from who I was (, who I) used to be…
If you lived in a(the) world I lived in,
yet the choice (of) which road is(to) pick is not yours to make.
kept together by /the/ sheer will through angst and pain.
You wander(wonder) if they are having the same conversation you had, with the incomprehensible man inside his mind(their minds).
Bugs:
Health did not increase with phoenix paste between Tang Ruo & Tigress battle.
The poem about “the harsh training required to reach the peak.” and the one about “your misfortune of being born into a decadent clan.” both use he pronouns rather than she although I am playing a female
Suggestion:
If injured in the battle with the monster when saving the boy + we try to save Ai or Ai has a high opinion of us, add a scene where Ai heals us or treats us after everything before we start going back to the sect. Probably have it happen regardless of whether we have regeneration because Ai would probably care for us either way.
In the Tang Ruo arena fight scene against Jing Qianfan, maybe add some options for the way we react?
Add an extra reaction from Xiwen to some of the poems. {The love poem about him, the poems about freedom, poems about cruelty to commoners, poem about our father}: Some level of questioning, just as we questioned him on whether his poem was about himself, or maybe something that tells us more about him.
i cant wait for the next update of this game all of them are nice in their own ways but i wonder if there will be some kind of special training method for the after expedition mc other than training with the elders or absorbing Qi like there is already in game last time the meditation of mc was stopped because of assassins so i can just wonder how stronger the mc would get if he/she actually made it i also am anxious to meet the true family of mc from the zhong clan and the first parts of its history just thinking about everything to come and how certain events with ros and the what ifs in the story that are still blank like as i said the mc true family from zhong clan it makes me very excited and anxious at same time i cant wait to play more and dev,dont give up your game is awesome and a few things you did on the history for power balancing and be not completely unfair is still unseen by some but after i had read several times the story i saw how broken ruo was in the power balance while mc was both on the winning side of the race of evolution and the losing side when competing with ruo thus causing mc to be talked down and mistreated after the Qi awakening the first emperor gave mc i saw scenes which by far its noticeable what you are cooking and i want to see far more of it. and on my earlier post about a second option to having Qi powers or inner energy ones it was not a critical post just a suggestion to add for people that dont like the plot twist of inner energy being a lie and the newgame+ like power up of using Qi and such so that these people dont feel annoyed i particularly dont mind that after the danger zone you lose inner energy since the first emperor himself said it was squeezing off the mc potential so in that point having no inner energy is actually perfect since at some point mc will be far more than ruo could ever dream of and that is already glimpsed at the battle against the zhong clan and its allies where you help ruo against them not counting at that moment mc was fighting several adversaries of late houtian or even peak if i remenber correctly so yes i know how broken mc can be i just said what i said on my last post because i wanted to give more options in case people feel annoyed by events that lead consequences such as the one that gave mc qi powers and removed its progress with inner energy and i repeat that i found the immensurable power boost after the danger zone the mc got awesome.im sorry if i cant convey the correct mensage even now but what im trying to tell is that i dont have anything to complain about your game i just thought of a suggestion and i expressed myself badly i dont know if im expressing myself good enough and i convey the correct message... if this dont express i dont know what will: this game is one of the best ones of its genre i know of and the only one of its genre i actually care and count the days to play even a minuscule update of it
Legit Way? after checking the HTML File... nope, if you kill the Son, you are instantly screwed to be ugly and annoyingly you can't ignore the mission to go out.
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This is fantastic writing! Already, I think the prince hates my gut, yet, at least I've made friends with Mei Mei and possible, Tigress??? I don't know if the purity is default to 100 or not, but I'm clearly a saint, a purity of a 100 and surpassed the prince. (I won 2 rounds but apparently I got my ass beat in the finals, I'm easily forgiven the people in the game, sticking to a virtuous route here!) I easily forgiven my father Wu! Although I question his development in the story, I wanna predict he will actually be proud for once if we succeed the material arts and become the as strongest clan? So far, I'm weak AF, but my agility saved my ass during the 2 rounds I've mentioned earlier. ＼(°o°)／ whoa, Mei Mei, can we be more than just friends, is this my first love of the same sex? Wow, I think I'm in love! ( ꈍᴗꈍ) Even if she's the sister of that jerk, ugh! 😩
ヽ(｡◕o◕｡)ﾉ. OMG, she's adorable, l beg for more updates! I will definitely beat the prince one day! In the kindest way possible.
When will the full game come out and what the ending will we become a God or what
Sounds like the average ending of a xianxia novel, if not a god we will just find out that there are world creating god beings, and beings above those, and then some more being above those still, and we will eventually find that there is yet another unexplored level beyond. xD
When is the next update dude we've been waiting and wassup wit you just hand out the password bro Your game is amazing
Is there any way to donate on itch?
Yes, I know there are other options like Patreon. But I don't have an account and I'm too lazy.
No, unfortunately. There are ways to donate on itch in general, but none of them would work for me
Next update???
This game was amazing!! I loved the story and all the different choices you can make. I love the gameplay mechanics. This game clearly had lots of blood, sweat, and tears put into. I hope it doesn't get dropped *knocks on wood*. I am definitely looking forward to the next update!
I must I am a disappointed for 39 days one month and some that's this is all the new update has it has no story to add in the plot and instead of the mc getting stronger he is weaker he is getting more damage in the arena like what the hell at this point I don't feel I like the mc is not the mc because everyone can beat him like he is an ant and you make fim fear persons you should make him not afraid of anyone even if the are way more powerful than him and when are you planning on make the mc the most powerful being in the game like hit someone like the monkey king and it kill him like he is notting i cant wait because the mc is too weak for too long😠😠😠
spoilers!
can you become nascent without murdering everyone?
(SPOILER)
How long is the lifespan of Qi Gathering, Qi Condensation and Core Formation respectively in and outside of PoMA world?
Hi @NickyDicky will POVs ever be on the free demo? Or are they only exclusive for patreons? Because not everyone has money laying around, and it's so sad not to see the povs of our favourite ro's. Maybe a Christmas release?
They will be included with the full release
Nick do you have an idea when the games going to be finished
Playing public .20 on mobile, and none of the new arena fights are loading in, says file not found.
Lost all my saves 5 times because of the stats menu glitch. 5/5, would make an essay to describe the hair and eye color the 6th time.
I became a child of the Demon Queen by accident. Highly recommend!
By the way the plot is amazing. The twist litteraly shocked me and some of the moments made me so excited that I barely stayed in place. MCs choices are actually well fitted and I had a really good time playing this demo. Can't wait for next updates! ♥️
Really loving the game, though I would like to say my piece. The hardest mode is cool, not that hard though, until you get to the qi part. When we achieve that part of the game, the difficult spike like hell. Qi is not very easy to manage, it is hard to get, and too costly to use. You need to use it for everything that you want to do, for talents, to upgrade your attributes cap, to use the golden seed. And about the golden seed, to make martial arts invalidated in an Xianxia/Wuxia media is kinda of bad, even more with how unbalanced the current system is. The experience you get is also very low. All in all, I loving the game, but belive it can be amazing with some changes.
Wow, this game is so damn good, the only way to praise it is to curse it!!!, I love the freedom that exists and you can even do that haha e.e, of course, I recommend increasing the difficulty of the game, don't get me wrong, it's fun to hit left and right every guy you meet, but after a while you get addicted to it, finally I curse He Mei, never trust a He!I hope there is an event where I can take my life, because of him I can't use the alchemy and I have to use my brain to become strong o.o
Late game really needs rebalancing for Mortal difficulty. Several of the checks need advance knowledge to pass, or unreasonable Qi expenditures early on (restaurant event with spear twin moment), and Arena fights feel nearly impossible even after the auction. I had to resort to legendaries (Demonic Overlord/Paragon of Virtue) to get the necessary XP; idk how I would get to the end of the game otherwise.
Regarding the arena specifically you basically spend double what you gain to heal from fights afterwards so you're always operating a net loss. Could be easily fixed by saying the sect heals you from arena fights and having your health reset to full after each fight.
Also regarding balance, the infirmary is insanely expensive compared to healing talismans and cleansing organs doesn't actually remove the amount you're spending in contribution points.
Also there may be a bunch of kills you don't get Qi for. I recall killing the opponent in the Ruo event and not getting awarded any.
Still of the opinion Qi should be reworked as well. The idea is nice but damn man I want to use my techniques without having to dedicate a whole legendary trait to it (Martial Sovereign). Or be able to regenerate without bonking my stat pool.
Skill issue. Just don't get hit so you won't need to heal 👍
Are you playing on Earth/Heavenly/Story difficulties or cheating? Cuz there are several attacks that are unavoidable if you don't use Qi, and even sometimes if you DO use Qi, or pass the stat check, and you can't be spending Qi on techniques if you're playing on mortal you need every stat increase u can get your hands on.
And yes some stuff still uses Qi even with Martial Sovereign. Infusion, golden barriers, qi infused punches, regeneration, etc. Only space/body/elemental attacks dont consume qi with that trait.
I was just joking xD but actually i think i died like one or two times because of fights. Everytime i either destroyed them or in the "end game" (i remember the ninjas or something) barely scraped by. I played on mortal and i dont know if im lucky or something but i had full stats almost the whole time. I had a talent for perception 100%. I also got the Demon Queen worm or whatever that was that boosted my stats. Pretty easy 😎
demon queen worm makes str and agi like 9999 in exchange for perma health losses. I suggest you try out the game without legendary traits and without using artifacts like dq worm and the power gloves to understand more of what i'm talking about
I appreciate that this update filled up some of the holes in the plot.
When will we be getting the next update it's been 31 days since it was last update🧐🧐😒😒
This is peak, Nothing can be better than this.
Okay when I'm using a skill umm ability??? Like Celestial shield or void leap... I press some of this things and then I die I don't why and I'm so confused and I don't know what to do?? Do I have to do something or it just happens
It only happens on story mode I think I don't know I play story mode all the time so... I don't know it's a bug or a feature
Have you noticed your hp? It's definitely not a feature. Celestia shield (protect) and void leap (evade). It definitely can't kill you. It should keep us alive, not dead. It might be a bug but I don't have any problems.
When is the next update I have been waiting for 26 Days
There are people who have been waiting for more than 6 months or 9 months haha. We have to keep waiting. The full game is definitely fun.
This game Mogg so hard!
I am dieing for the next update but I am so disappointed in the mc power he is supposed to be a God but mare mortal can harm him the mc need to become overpowered because he is so weak please make mc powerful I am playing in god mode and i feel like i am playing in normal mode
Click Story Mode. I already tried it. Everything is much easier.
It's a shame that our FemaleMC is beautiful as otherworldly beauty but no one compliments our FemaleMC. People say Wu Lan sell herself to our Dragon waifu Before the auction starts and People compliment our Dragon waifu (she's f*cking hot -from outer disciples or inner disciples I don't know). I feel sorry for her. I'm sure she's much more beautiful than every female characters. There are still some noble who like Tigress, but our FemaleMC doesn't have any. What is the cause? Poor Wu Lan. No one compliment our FemaleMC. Only got punched and teeth fell out but the teeth kept coming back. No one is interested in the beauty of our FemaleMC. At first I thought both men and women will scream at our FemaleMC otherworldly beauty and body hourglass figure like Fubuki from One Punch Man......Even Fu Bing isn't interested in raping our FemaleMC After poisoning our FemaleMC. What a waste of otherworldly beauty lol.
After the full game release I'm sure every misspelled words in this game will be corrected. And Full Game definitely free Because NickyDicky earn $750/month And it is possible to earn more than $850 after the full version Release. the game won't end easily and It's possible to have more than 1000 episodes Because the game potential is too great lol. This is The best story game I've ever played. I'll wait for the full version.
The main character's body explodes is the ending, right? We have to wait until it updates, right? I chose blurry stone and death. I've been looking for a game like this for a long time, Finally. even if I have to wait another 10 years until the story ends, if I don't die first, I'll download it and play. But for now, I'm going to go back and play the male character's storyline. I am bored of normal nsfw. If this game has NSFW Just a little bit would be good. The story is very interesting. Really interesting. I have never played a game this fun. The writer of the story is really excellent. I wish there were sex scenes sometimes. This game is not a normal game since it has a dark story and our father have sex with half of the insect. Including milf.
To be honest, I don't know anything about this game. But I love it. I downloaded it 1 day ago because I accidentally pressed download. I don't know if the body explode is the end or not, but I went back and selected every stone and all died.
You have to get rid of the 99,999 Failures. You can either throw it away, or if you beat Long Chen you can use it on him before choosing the stones. You exploding is not the end of the game, the bomb just explodes in your spatial ring.
Thank you so much! The protagonist/the main character has no plot armor at all. Got a new body but died from the explosion. Our protagonist has almost no role in the battle with Long Chen. Long Chen was like the main character, but he wasn't. He killed guo.
Thanks again. I finished playing the demo. The main female character is friend with a prince after our FemaleMC saved his life but I would prefer our FemaleMC to be the prince's wife. Have at least 3 children before going to another world Lol. I am sure we can choose our husband/wife in the future update.
I adore this game. The twist at the end of the expedition too- Agh. SO GOOD. I want more. I just- I literally cannot form words. I love this so much.
I love playing though it i just don't like doing the run around part but 10/10 though ^^
Love it 😍
I am playing as a female yet in the beginning in the dialogue for when we are 13 and trying to get the Divine Water Herb when asking whether He Gang could leave a few stalks for us on the 7th line the woman said “Brother Gang, this moron is harassing me. Get rid of him” rather than ‘her’
Righteous paragon in talents says Magnaminous instead of Magnanimous
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Tang Ruo puts her arm on the back of your head and flips himself (herself) over your charging body. She taps your spine with her foot, causing you to stumble.
At last, you feel it. Feel the power that truly separates the mortals from those who have ascended beyong (beyond)
He Jun shouts as his body erupts with an unimaginable /for your/ speed.
You glance towards Tang Ruo, yet she appears unbothered by the corpses, save for a slight aversion in his (her) countenance.
You dig it into (in) and the taste of what seems (seemed, at first,) like plain rice amazes you.
We don’t how she does this (it), but her rice is ten time (times) better than if any of us tried to cook the same dish.”
Suddenly, as (though) becoming shy, she turns away her head (turns her head, looks away,) and scratches her ear.
Noticing you, injured yet eager to come to her aid, Ai smiles a small, barely noticeable, yet /the most/ sincere smile, before /she/ resolutely shakes (shaking) her head.
Ai yells, the indignant in her washing away the guilt (the indignity she felt washing away the guilt)
“But? without strength they? matter not.” (“but, without strength… they matter not.”)
“So, what it is (is it) you’re saying? That those without power have no use at all?”
Not if you (want) to make sure that something like today doesn’t happen again.
And you are (far) from being the only one. Unlike its usual state, with only a few dozen (dozens) of disciples watching or participating in the fights, the Arena now is (is currently) almost half-full — an astounding turnout, probably the highest it has even (ever) been for an Early-Houtian contender.
You spot Jing Guo, obviously tense and uncomfortable, squirm in his chair. ➡️ (visibly tense and uncomfortable, squirming in his chair.)
He withstands the blow, not cut or injured, but is pushed back a dozen of steps. ➡️ (He withstands the blow without being cut or injured, but is forcefully pushed back a dozen steps.)
“Not bad. In your stage, you’re probably unrivaled (unmatched/unparalleled). But against me, it’s (still) far from enough.”
Tang Ruo is obviously present, sitting closed-eyes on her flying sword. ➡️ (Tang Ruo is unmistakably present, seated with closed eyes on her flying sword.)
Whether others are too afraid of her, her wild demeanor too intense for them to handle, or her loneliness is a display of disciples’ contempt for her origin, you do not know. ➡️ (It’s unclear whether others fear her, find her intense wild demeanor too daunting, or if her solitude reflects the disdain for her origins among the disciples.)
There also Jing Guo and Yuan Fang, conversing with each other about some matters. ➡️ (There’s also Jing Guo and Yuan Fang, deep in conversation about some topic or another.)
Dozens of feet in length, with dark red carcass and tens of tiny little legs crawling at its sides. Two thick, long tentacle-like whiskers spread out from its face and six black as the void itself eyes stare straight into your very soul. Hissing, but with the sheer volume of its voice the noise more resembles a growl, the giant centipede raises a third of its body, its skeleton unnaturally nimble, and charges straight at you. ➡️ (Several feet in length, with a dark red exoskeleton and numerous tiny legs scuttling at its sides. Two thick, long tentacle-like whiskers extend from its face, and six eyes as black as the void gaze into your soul. Emitting a hiss that resembles more of a growl due to its sheer volume, the giant centipede raises a third of its body with unnatural agility and charges directly at you.)
“The lizard kid and the Whore Chao’s daughter are the only, one (ones) with some amount of guts.”
Yang Bohai then carefully studies your group with his dangerous, bloodthirsty gaze. You hear gulps all around you, even see some disciples go weak in the knees — and when the Elder’s eyes meet yours, your understand why. ➡️ (Yang Bohai carefully studies your group with his dangerous, bloodthirsty gaze. You hear gulps all around you, and see some disciples go weak in the knees — when the Elder’s eyes meet yours, you understand why.)
There’s nothing inside them but death. But blood, gore and suffering. All people have a scent, and this old man smells of murder. ➡️ (There’s nothing inside them but death, blood, gore, and suffering. Everyone has a scent, and this old man reeks of murder.)
No ones dares to speak either. His loud, thunderous voice has already been enough, the hint of something utterly wicked in his tone makes your skin crawl in terror. ➡️ (No one dares to speak. His loud, thunderous voice alone is enough; the hint of something utterly wicked in his tone makes your skin crawl in terror.)
Smartly, you decide to keep silent: talking back to man like that sounds painful. ➡️ (Wisely, you choose to remain silent; talking back to a man like that seems like it would be painful.)
Alongside a massive bomb of terrible destruction. Are you truly planning on using it, damning both your Senior Brother, who now sits with a peaceful expression, and your fellow disciples to certain death for no fault of their own? ➡️ (Alongside a massive bomb of terrible destruction, are you truly planning to use it, condemning both your Senior Brother, now sitting with a peaceful expression, and your fellow disciples to certain death for no fault of their own?)
First of (off), this Danger Zone is quite… strange.
If some of you have seconds (are having second) thoughts, I can crush your skulls right now to rid you of them.
We’ve already sent a few dozen disciples back (in). Two of them even came back, so quit whining.
You look forward, towards dozens of disciples sitting cross-legged, in total mental felicity, before a young man with a zither in his hands. His long, thin fingers carefully caress the instrument’s strings and he lets out a blindingly charming smile. His features are already too pretty for a man — big, expressive blue eyes, full, thick crimson lips and long lashes that flopped with every blink — yet now, with a cute dimple on the left side of his mouth, he appears unnaturally comely. ➡️ (You look ahead to find dozens of disciples sitting cross-legged, in complete mental serenity, gathered around a young man skillfully playing a zither. His long, slender fingers delicately caress the strings of the instrument as he flashes a blindingly charming smile. His features are strikingly beautiful for a man — with big, expressive blue eyes, full, thick crimson lips, and long lashes that flutter with every blink. The addition of a cute dimple on the left side of his mouth makes him appear unnaturally handsome.)
And when you think it’s all there is, just a pretty, androgynous youth, comes the voice. The most ethereal, the most angelic voice you’ve ever heard. A voice that grips your heart, that gently forces you to listen and refuses to let go of its hold until its finished. ➡️ (And just when you think he’s merely a pretty, androgynous youth, his voice emerges. It’s the most ethereal, the most angelic voice you’ve ever heard. A voice that grips your heart, gently compelling you to listen, refusing to release its hold until it’s finished.)
You approach the group of Martial Artists you noticed before. A couple of disciples from your own sect are already there, drinking tea as they jubilantly tell each other stories. ➡️ (You approach the group of Martial Artists you had noticed earlier. A couple of disciples from your own sect are already there, sipping tea and jubilantly exchanging stories with each other.)
Does (the) name Zhong Zhi ring a bell?
Treat it as (the) senseless ramblings of your Senior Brother.
I’ve seen far too many fellow disciples die to lack caution. ➡️ (Zones are chaotic, dangerous, and unpredictable. I’ve witnessed too many fellow disciples perish due to a lack of caution.)
The demonic disciples stop a hundred yards from the spot of your gathering and their hungry gazes start judging you with a (an) intensity that lacks any notion of restraint.
One man, in particular, stands out. Pale skin, sick countenance, white hair and crimson, blood-colored eyes: when his gaze lazily finds yours, your body freezes. Deep in your soul, you feel primal, instinctual fear. This man is a predator, one that stands at the apex of natural food chain. And you, to him, is nothing but a helpless pray. ➡️ (One man stands out in particular: pale skin, a sickly countenance, white hair, and eyes the color of crimson blood. When his gaze lazily meets yours, your body freezes. Deep within your soul, you feel primal, instinctual fear. This man is a predator, standing at the apex of the natural food chain. To him, you are nothing but helpless prey.)
He leans back, grinning an ugly grin, and you, unwittingly, breathe out in relief. Now that you can think again, you realize you recognize him: he’s titled, a rarity among those who haven’t undergone their Second Rebirth, the Young Blood Hunter: his name founded in him hunting, and slaying, thousands of Martial Artists just like you. ➡️ (He leans back, grinning an ugly grin, and unwittingly, you exhale in relief. Now that you can think again, you realize you recognize him: he’s titled, a rarity among those who haven’t undergone their Second Rebirth, the Young Blood Hunter — renowned for hunting down and slaying thousands of Martial Artists like you.)
The air around you is hot and moist, as sterling (pristine) as only uninhibited land can be. But it’s not just pureness you feel when you breathe. (Yet, it’s not just purity you sense when you breathe.)
A quick look around confirms that you’re alone, with no one else to share your discovery with. An eventuality you were prepared with (for), but one that makes you…
… /are/ indifferent.
… /are/ relieved.
… /are/ excited.
… /are/ nervous.
… /are/ disappointed.
Her/His answers only confuse you further, but you understand that the woman/man already does her/his (best) to communicate in a language she/he obviously isn’t fluent in.
His empyrean is much /more/ better sounding
The old man waves, causing all the bows and /the/ spears to be lowered /down/ .
The world we (we’re) in , it’s (is) called the Endless Jungle Realm.
These outsiders are to be called Apostles of the Heavens. Because that’s who they are and that’s what their purpose it (is).
No more words are needed (need) to be said — let the battle begin.
But out (our) time is very limited, Apostle. Scriptures say that after your arrival into the world, you’ll have about two months to assemble the key, before terrible things /will/ begin to happen.”
Please, Brother (Sister) Ming Yue, you flatter me too much. The difference between us is vast and unsurmountable, enough to form a sea of inequality.
Similar to you, another Martial Artist have (has) taken control of the natives, a man named Fu Bing.
For a moment, you delve into your memory, trying to figure out why (what) caused the girl to behave this way, and realization comes to you soon after.
Your sibling lowers her head, and a pink blush appears on her cheeks, before she agitatedly clenches (her) fists and replies.
Her words, however, are interrupted by (the) startling ringing of a bell.
instead of the houses you spent your days walking (in), there are burning, smoking structures of wood (…) and instead of that fresh, pure air there is a rotten smell of blood and death.
because the sight of corpses that riddles (riddle) the intimately known streets rids (rid) you of your ability to think.
“Don’t come close!” — she yells, but breathing (breaths) out in relief after recognizing you.
There, she suddenly removes one of the wooden planks in the walls, revealing a large, (previously) concealed /before/, compartment.
It doesn’t take long for the owner of the voice to found (find) your family.
He smiles, wickedly and lewdly, as he stares at the women. ➡️ (His wicked, lewd smile lingers as his gaze fixates unsettlingly on the women.)
he swings his ax, embedding the weapon into your only parent’s skull, freezing her terrified and beginning (pleading) expression (upon her wrinkled face…) forever.
Your sister shrieks, (a) piercing, eardrum shattering sound full of emotion, and runs to your mother’s body.
How did this happen? How did a sunny, happy day turned (turn) into this? How? Why?…
one that you bought and trained in secret, one that you hoped would be your trump car (card)
Good. Leave alone (me be) for now, I need to figure some things out.
That burned, disfigured face /it/ still the same
The disciple of the Omniscient Sage has also poured tea, a kind of it that you don’t recognize but with a fragrance that makes you want to take long, deep whiff. (you do not recognize the herb used, but the tea’s fragrance makes you want to take a long, deep whiff.)
In fact, the only remaining sign of her previous poor state are (is) her (torn clothes, still) stained with blood.
The Princess seems (distant) from her usual self: you are used to her being a lofty, almost otherworldly figure that (would) never put anyone in her eyes . (;) but now, with her unable to control her anger and frustration, the princess is much more human-like (appears far more… human).
You wonder just how badly did Long Chen humiliate her (Long Chen humiliated her), for the imperial heir to be this irritable.
In the battles on that level (a battle of that scale), few minutes is a lot of time.
“Desire for knowledge and respect for those who has (have) it are essential for any educated, civilized man. Doesn’t Princess agree?”
as (though) it was king, and everything else in the world its servant.
He tilts his head (,) amusingly (amused) instead (,) and smiles a (confident,) light (smile.) /, but confident smile./
The two lock (locked) /their/ gazes, /with/ neither budging nor escalating the argument further.
sighs (,) and sits down, palming
For many, the princess had to explain the purpose of both to you and Xiwen. The effects make you salivate. ➡️ (Many of the artifacts required explanation for both you and Xiwen, and the princess graciously obliged. The effects of said artifacts could almost make you salivate.)
A pair of earring (earrings) that allows its wearers to communicate with nothing but their thoughts.
Boots (that) enhance your speed two-fold.
“Well, will (with) all of this, we can definitely take Long Chen on”
Although with the Princess’s riches we have a strong possibility of winning. However, our opponent this time is not an ordinary top-tier Peak-Houtian. ➡️ (Although the princess’s riches give us a strong possibility of winning, our opponent this time is not an ordinary toptier PeakHoutian.)
There are many in our stage who can do it (so).
Knowing that man, he will go (all) out from the start, not bothering to conserve his strength. I will do my best to exhaust his resources (,) and then, when I give a signal, I will paralyze him for a split second.
Just remember not to be seen beforehand, the effect (element) of surprise is imperative for our success.”
And now, when (with) her belly carried (carrying) your unborn child, (the) love you had (have) for your (her) has grown even further.
(While) It’s (it’s) true that she always has (has always) been inexpressive, which meant (made) her every gesture of affection that much more meaningful, but you (you still) certainly could not imagine her frowning at your exclamations.
The Blood King snaps his finger and the ground beneath you lits (lights) up
and knocked up (my) daughter.
And now, the third and final /is/ step
enough to leave them cripple (crippled) if not outright killed.
the chains bounding (binding) you
beside (besides) your wife dying in your arms
His fault that you lived the last decade on a (the) run, like a pathetic criminal.
When you’re finally done and the man who used to haunt (you) /during both/ day and night is but a pile of scattered meat, you collapse.
Nothing is impossible, everything is withing (within) the realm of possibility.
Your wife, child (,) and sister dead?
He was never one to be humble, but (right) now he seems much more (even) cockier than usual.
but your Senior Brother looks as if the outcome of today was already set in stone and no one could a change (it) even if they tried.
Flesh regrows on /the/ your lookalike’s skeleton in a matter of seconds, not leaving behind even a scar.
Her freakish, long nails dig into your eyes, her teeth biting hard into your shoulder. ➡️ (Her freakishly long nails dig into your eyes as her teeth bite hard into your shoulder.)
One chews your flesh and gouges your sight, viciously tearing you apart in (an) animalistic fashion.
Thankfully, the rest of the disciples is (are) occupied by your ally and you can focus on Ai and Tigress instead.
but the poor girl doesn’t know yet just how big you (your) gains have been during this expedition.
He’s thrown to the ground, with covered in blood Long Chen standing above him. (above him stands Long Chen, covered in blood.)
Xiwen, (with) his beautiful face ruining (littered) by bruises (with bruises), smiles. There are (Some of his) teeth (are) missing, you notice, but he doesn’t seem to care. Instead, his earring flashes red and he spreads out his hands (arms).
A golden, winged figure rushes through the sky at (a) terrifying speed
Humanoid in shape, yet covered /in/ head to toe in glistening scales . (, and) wielding a familiar /to you/ majestic sword with blood dripping from its blade.
Long Chen’s head on the ground, unattached to (detached from) his body, and with a frozen expression of disbelief (disbelief frozen upon his face).
“The fact that someone as proud and quick-tempered as you attempts (is attempting) to negotiate for peace tells me all I need to know.”
She hasn’t explained to you the pill’s effect (the pill’s effects to you) either, but, assuming from (judging by) her words, it’s something that would allow you to participate in this battle.
Writing Improvements/Mistakes:
The fluttering leaves, the flying (of the) insects, even the moments (movements) of (the) people around you has decreased their pace (have slowed) — it takes you a moment to adjust to your new, enhanced perception (,) and you wonder just how long it’ll last and what would be the (kind of) side-effects (will follow).
In attempts (an attempt) to retaliate, Long Chen swings his club around, but despite its might, the weapon is too slow
Long Chen, who before (previously would have) fiercely attacked with his club, suddenly stopped (stops). His whole body froze (freezing) as he stared (stares) somewhere in (into) the distance with a blank, empty look (expression).
Did the arrogant and honorable princess just used (use)… poison?
The mist of blood that (was) once /has been/ your Senior Brother condenses back into a human shape /again/ and Long Chen, naked as the day he was born, appears before you.
Upon contact with Long Chen’s skull, you don’t simply break through the broke (bone): such great might is hidden in your punch that your opponent’s head explodes under the impact of your hit.
Long Chen lifeless body falls to the ground, not a sign of life in his corpse. ➡️ (Long Chen’s body falls to the ground, lifeless.)
“Come, get up, we need to check if that monster if (is) finally dead.”
“Alright. Let’s make a deal then. You’ll hand over the stone and we’ll bound (bind) you with (an) Energy-suppressing rope. I will guarantee your safety.”
“I (can) depart to the underworld any time.”
but realizing the pointless (pointlessness) of it all, swallows his words.
When Long Chen came to you, offering /a/ five thousand gold to join his army, you refused.
A bum that lucked out and risen (rose) above his destined stature.
Taking on them all alone? ➡️ (Taking them all on alone?)
There’s a chance of her become someone important in the future. Which means, you’ll benefit a lot from ingraining yourself to her while that’s still a possibility. ➡️ (There’s a chance she’ll become someone important in the future, which means you’ll benefit a lot from ingratiating yourself to her while its still possible.)
but Tang Ruo wouldn’t even look at you twice. ➡️ (but Tang Ruo wouldn’t even look twice at you.)
She throws himself (herself) into the slaughter and spares no mercy.
Five, ten, fifteen – and then /a/ thirty more.
They activate their wondrous skills, use tactics and even resort to, out of necessity, to the use of under-handed means like means, yet Long Chen gets up time and time again. ➡️ (They activate their formidable skills, use tactics, and even resort to the use of under-handed means, out of necessity. Yet, Long Chen gets up time and time again.)
replaying in your head that punch again and again. ➡️ (unable to help mentally replaying that punch over and over again.)
How many worlds you’ve (have you) traversed to find them? How many enemies you’ve (have you) made after kidnapping daughters, sisters (,) and brides? How many wars you’ve (have you) waged (…) and how many lives you’ve taken to gather them all (how many lives have you taken to gather them all)?
Countless. And (Yet,) you don’t feel the slightest amount of remorse (,) Because (because), as you give these women a glance, you reassure yourself that all your actions have been worth it.
But… how can you exist in this world when she was not (isn’t) by your side?
What (All that) persists is anguish Unbearable agony as they scream out in agony (, and finally, their screams of unbearable agony echo around me…) How can they not, when all of them are burning alive?
You look up. You feel their anger. makes the sky darken and clouds full of thunder to form (The sky darkens, clouds form, and thunder rumbles — loudly echoing their fury). /And/ You Smirk. What can (the) Heavens do against a God?
As (the) women begin to slowly die (slowly begin to die), their quintessential energies (being) used to fuel your insanity of a (heretical)/(insane) plan, a portal starts to form.
but that would be akin to calling a sparkle from rubbing sticks a great wildfire. ➡️ (but that would be akin to equating a raging wild fire to a mere spark.)
“Will it damage his (hers)?” — you query, referring to the Princess.
“That’s a possibility, but I doubt it. To shatter arrogance as thick as his (hers), Long Chen’s club is not big enough.”
He walked forward as (if) he owned this entire world and, in a way, you realize he really did
(With his) Hands claspes (clasped) behind his back, Long Chen took (takes) heavy, firm steps. Hearing you approach, he turns his head and smiles (in a) friendly (manner).
Mental alignments (ailments) can get dangerous, if left untreated.
You used means I didn’t thought (never thought) you’d be willing to use.
Long Chen snorts, though you don’t (know) whether he does so at (due to) your naivety or out of (feeling) insult.
No. But, you’ve (have you) seen a masked disciple running around?
Long Chen pursues (purses) his lips
It’s not like I’m bursting with (the) desire to do so.
You think I’m willing to enter that snake (Snake’s) nest? Hell no.
Her unapologetic gaze drills you int (into you)
All your (you) need is to restore your qi and then bend the void to your will.
but you need you (the) fuel desperately and mortal ants are not good for anything else.
Only now (do) you know: your entire civilization (, to him,) is a merely (has merely been) a pig that he has fattened (for consumption) , and you yourself is (are) the main dish.
But you can’t let him see your weak (weakness).
To glance at her again and lose her, to watch myself stray from who I was (, who I) used to be…
If you lived in a (the) world I lived in,
yet the choice (of) which road is (to) pick is not yours to make.
kept together by /the/ sheer will through angst and pain.
You wander (wonder) if they are having the same conversation you had, with the incomprehensible man inside his mind (their minds).
Bugs:
Health did not increase with phoenix paste between Tang Ruo & Tigress battle.
The poem about “the harsh training required to reach the peak.” and the one about “your misfortune of being born into a decadent clan.” both use he pronouns rather than she although I am playing a female
Suggestion:
If injured in the battle with the monster when saving the boy + we try to save Ai or Ai has a high opinion of us, add a scene where Ai heals us or treats us after everything before we start going back to the sect. Probably have it happen regardless of whether we have regeneration because Ai would probably care for us either way.
In the Tang Ruo arena fight scene against Jing Qianfan, maybe add some options for the way we react?
Add an extra reaction from Xiwen to some of the poems. {The love poem about him, the poems about freedom, poems about cruelty to commoners, poem about our father}: Some level of questioning, just as we questioned him on whether his poem was about himself, or maybe something that tells us more about him.
Little recommendation: If necessary, you could use chatgpt to fix or review stuff when writing.
Ex:
Place the text in chatgpt and ask it to review your wording and grammar and give you tips.
or
Tell chatgpt;
Keep everything mostly the same, simple, enhance, fix grammar, spelling, sound, and structure: {the scene}
or
Keep everything mostly the same, simple, enhance, fix grammar, spelling, and structure: {the scene}
or
Keep everything the same, fix grammar, spelling, and structure: {the scene}
i cant wait for the next update of this game all of them are nice in their own ways but i wonder if there will be some kind of special training method for the after expedition mc other than training with the elders or absorbing Qi like there is already in game last time the meditation of mc was stopped because of assassins so i can just wonder how stronger the mc would get if he/she actually made it i also am anxious to meet the true family of mc from the zhong clan and the first parts of its history just thinking about everything to come and how certain events with ros and the what ifs in the story that are still blank like as i said the mc true family from zhong clan it makes me very excited and anxious at same time i cant wait to play more and dev,dont give up your game is awesome and a few things you did on the history for power balancing and be not completely unfair is still unseen by some but after i had read several times the story i saw how broken ruo was in the power balance while mc was both on the winning side of the race of evolution and the losing side when competing with ruo thus causing mc to be talked down and mistreated after the Qi awakening the first emperor gave mc i saw scenes which by far its noticeable what you are cooking and i want to see far more of it. and on my earlier post about a second option to having Qi powers or inner energy ones it was not a critical post just a suggestion to add for people that dont like the plot twist of inner energy being a lie and the newgame+ like power up of using Qi and such so that these people dont feel annoyed i particularly dont mind that after the danger zone you lose inner energy since the first emperor himself said it was squeezing off the mc potential so in that point having no inner energy is actually perfect since at some point mc will be far more than ruo could ever dream of and that is already glimpsed at the battle against the zhong clan and its allies where you help ruo against them not counting at that moment mc was fighting several adversaries of late houtian or even peak if i remenber correctly so yes i know how broken mc can be i just said what i said on my last post because i wanted to give more options in case people feel annoyed by events that lead consequences such as the one that gave mc qi powers and removed its progress with inner energy and i repeat that i found the immensurable power boost after the danger zone the mc got awesome.im sorry if i cant convey the correct mensage even now but what im trying to tell is that i dont have anything to complain about your game i just thought of a suggestion and i expressed myself badly i dont know if im expressing myself good enough and i convey the correct message... if this dont express i dont know what will: this game is one of the best ones of its genre i know of and the only one of its genre i actually care and count the days to play even a minuscule update of it
Calm down
when next update?
also are you alright dev?
Please when is the next update
By the way when you are in the cave with Princess Ruo. She is called the option call her "him"
Does anyone know if after beating the vampire I can survive the encounter with Mei at the cave?
How do you fight the vampire
Choose dialogue options correctly, like don't be accusatory
Anyone know how to avoid being turned ugly by the demon queen or can I just avoid her existence or is there a way to kill the demon queen
Edit the Story Variable.
Legit Way? after checking the HTML File... nope, if you kill the Son, you are instantly screwed to be ugly and annoyingly you can't ignore the mission to go out.
Welp guess I'm deleting my save... again
Yo, can someone tell me how to get Monke Man as my master
Learn Void Step before the expedition and don't piss him off on the peeping event, then reject the other masters when offered mentorship. That's it.