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On a less sketchy "I edit the story variable". Maybe there should be a way to keep being beautiful and be the demon queen daughter? Like what else do i need 5000 Charisma if I can't bullshit a Crazy Demon Queen? So since there is no choice for that yet I just edit more story variable because redoing the whole save just to not kill pang bo is annoying. I will headcanon this as "Cuckoo in the head Lesbian MC manage to convince the crazy demon queen to keep her being pretty by pure bullshit and convincing her that being beautiful is the new ugly :D."

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You know, I feel strange. Last Time I play this I remember that I can make a Lesbian character with my Female MC able to write a poem about love about He Mei. but it seems like it is not an option anymore. Are you currently rewriting it? If not, can you just unlock it? I rather see my female MC flirt like a male toward other girls than getting blocked for no reason from the love interest. I also remember Elder Rin was unlocked for Female but does the requirement change? If I'm not allowed to be Elder Rin disciple as female I might try to edit the save to allow me to do it as female because my last save was at that point.

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Or at least tell me what variable I need to turn on so a female character can date female character?

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Ok I think i got it... I think... When you download the save file, you can edit the save data. In there there is something that say "_ro" if you change the false into true... It should allow you to date girl as girl. Just don't blame me or the author if some of the love scene looks weird. I would accept weird love scene more than being locked out from same-sex love interest.

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Oh yea, I forget "Scene.prototype.obfuscator" and "Scene.prototype.deobfuscator" still exist, actually. to make sure the game can load your edited save. you also need to edit the HTML File by changing the thing that basically "Obfuscate your save data into password". Basically if you edit the HTML, go to find then change the password obfuscator to have the same word. like for example there is a line that written " "!": "E", " then all you need to do is change it into " "!": "!", ". I'm not a tech wiz so the gist of it is change it into the same wording then it would works.

Sorry author, BUT I'M that determined to unlock the lesbian route.

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Ok, I tried and fail it seems the author make the password encryption more annoying. So I will decide to test if I can edit the variable change from the story itself. i think i finally got it just use notepad++ and change "ro false" into "ro true" it should work i think since I change the variable of the story itself and not the save data. The only downside is you need to recreate your character.

EDIT:  Tried this, and IT WORK! Manage to flirt with Female Tang Ruo as a Female :D

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I know I'm late saying this but the creator of the game live in Russia and LGBTQ content are banned there. For legal reasons he deleted everything about the gays/lesbians content.

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Shout out to my second favourite russian(after Lenin of course )

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Need help!!! Please can someone explain me why in Poetry competition with Xiwen i just can't write a love's poetry for him or Ruo? ... and it seems i just cannot have them like RO at all... is it because my MC is not female? :'(

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Yep. Author is russian and he had to remove LGBT content to avoid legal issues.

Someone posted a workaround somewhere involving editing the game's code but I can't find them for you

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Sooo sad... but still thank you!! I was soo lost. 💙

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Search the game in choice of mods site, they have uhh some m menu where you can change various modifications, such as having  "enable romance despite same gender" and others really "unfair"

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But idk if they have the game in web, i play in android

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Ok i will try that... thank you very much ;)

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It's cool and all but I wish there was an easier way to save. Even if you save it to a file, you still lose everything. 

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How can you read tang's pov after the tournament at the beginning? Is it only aviable for male or is it something else ?

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Its premium only content

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ngl kinda lame that you're forced to become pretty much a cultivating vampire after the expedition.

story wise i guess the reveal makes sense? but the way you're forced to penny pinch qi in the "normal" difficulty and above makes it so you can't use (or more so get heavily discouraged of using) your powers over saving it to upgrade your stats. to make matters worse your powers don't actually change the outcome of fights significantly over just using your physicals, so theres basically no reason to use say your new elemental stuff and lose 3 qi permanently over just passing a stat check for agility/constitution/strength. or god forbid you want to use your regeneration perk because now you spend 1 qi to regen, better stick with talismans and choose/roll another perk if you're not after poison immunity (which we might have lost anyway when our whole body got remade by tang wei)

if i could choose that i'd stay with inner energy, because honestly this whole qi business has not been worth it in any form or shape whatsoever, at least mechanically.

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he could actually make it a choice with tang wei to keep things as they were or to receive the  power of the Qi cause at the point of the expedition the mc "can" be a middle stage houtian if they manipulate mei mei to give the ascension pill or receive the blessing of the spirit inside the expedition zone so basically you will go to late houtian,peak and on, so the mc evolution will be inside the "normal-guidelines" instead of being the nightmare-fueling monster of power that tang wei was xiwen himself was surprised with mc's appearence and he/she being able to harness qi considering that the grandfather of mc still hasn't taught him/her to use since he was absent most of mc's life so i think it can be a feature for those that dont want to go all their effort on building a good strong character to be in vain at that point. and a a alternative ending that differentiates from qi route and inner energy route that would open more room for possibility of replaying the game differently instead of a semi-set path that gradually changes until you receive qi.

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Lil question, in the "field trip" you have the option to give up or fight and the hostage (your kinda friend) dies... is there a way to save him and still kick there asses ?

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To save friend you have to tell Le about Mei Mei’s plan to kill him, so he’ll feel grateful and owe you a favor. To do that you need to agree to kill him.

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telling him that at the beginning of the field Trip?

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Yeyeyee, the option to talk abut his relationship with MeiMei.

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thank you very much

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Yw bro :3

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Hi, I like the story so far (volcano tribe). Thanks for the enormous amount of work.

Here’s feedback for when you have time and energy to read it: Fights are great fun. Minor preference: the numbers measuring progress feel flat. It reminds me of some Play by Post rules. You can’t feel wealthy counting cents #analogy. I feel a lot of my choices don’t have much impact (= I prefer games with less content but with more impact). I feel some choices have totally good / bad options. I find it acceptable when it means following the code of wulin, not so much when it’s a random encounter. Still, I went that far because the plot is very good and some choices matter. One suggestion: some choices about the world could be made about the world just as much as about the main character. It works, it doesn’t break anything, and it lets go with people’s fantasy. Of course, which ones and how needs to be thought through.

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my mc when considering the  xiwen deal

xiwen: you could stay by the empire side and I will not harm you or you can join us, what will it be

my mc: what kind of stupid ass deal is that, no matter what I did, I never got any respect around here, heck some weeks ago I had to fight and kill two tangs that were involved in a attack and some guards who were supposed to protect the target, failed and died on me, leaving me to getting slap for my "uselessness" by another tang, without me explaining but the tang allowed his "son in law" to tell his own side of the story, so fuck the empire I am done

xiwen: ..... ughhh welcome to the club

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How do you rent out the whole inn in the beginning

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Be arrogant to the guard

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Now I am sad. First time playing. Played over an hour or more. Decided to reload and I am stuck at info screen. I can't progress. I can only check options like attributes and others. Return to game just places me at the info screen again. Lost all motivation to try from beginning again......

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that happend to me to. Someone need to fix this bug

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that bug is common with pretty much every wip. it prolly  wont be fixed anytime soon 

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Great game! Already on a 3rd playthrough! 

Just one question how do i became Ma Rin's disciple? I already did all the others masters path so I want to complete it 

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i believe you need to be male(choose the male presest character just incase) , have good-looking trait(probably not). when ma rin asks you to look into xiwen before the Zone you agree, tak to xiwen at the volcano before talking to Tang Wei. When you wake up and talk to Ma Rin just agree to the things she want you to do, then when you learn about Xiwen tell her(might not be needed). then when you start choosing elders choose her.

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thank you 

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Hi guys, pls can anyone tell me how to use that "protected save" option , coz I cant see that option anywhere and whenever I close the chrome all my progress disappears and I had to start from scratch!!!

press the upload save button by all the others at the top (by the stat view button). then scroll to the bottom and there's a tiny button that lets you upload the file. then you just scroll back up and press upload save

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Windows Defender and Opera is simply blocking the download saying there's a virus. I trust the dev since I've downloaded this game multiple times already, but what could have happened? This never happened with this game before.

But the browser version works just fine, seems there's just something wrong with the download maybe.

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Yeah, I just created an exception to it in Windows Defender. 

I tried playing in the browser version but it messed up my save, and Tang Ruo whom I had decided to be a woman was regarded as a male. Also, I like to use the Cheat Master thing to edit stats, and it didn't work on the browser version.

But, well, nothing bad happened when I used it after putting an exception on windows defender. It may just be something wrong with the file, maybe it had a link, like a patreon link, and it got flagged? Regardless, just adding an exception worked fine.

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This is so strange lmao, I have no idea why this is happening. Tried checking it out myself with different browsers/antivirus scans, but I don't get anything. It's just an HTML page, you can get it yourself by right-clicking while the game is loaded and choosing 'save page' lol

I will play the browser version later but the download was blocked.  claimed it was a virus (trojan)

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... what?
Can a html file even carry a trojan? It's literally just a saved webpage (then again, I'm not that knowledgeable about these things)

I don't know why either but I figured I would let you know in case it's causing an actual issue for you or in the future.

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the demon queen made me her daughter and now I'm ugly

such is life.

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When will bios be updated?

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Soon. Hopefully...

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I kind of wish there was a Reputation system along with the Alignment system, like in reputation we have good/evil & unknown/well-known or something of the sort, depending on your rep for being good or bad you are either a bandit or something or a virtuous person I dunno, you just have some kind of rep. So my alignment can be different from how people see me, and if there are items that view your alignment you can have an evil item that you have to hide or bluff about but have your reputation be that you’re some kind of angelic human being.

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I’ve also noticed a few spelling mistakes and missing words in some of the texts, I’ll go through them again and see if I can tell you exactly which.

I remember there was one where instead of we’ll it was written we’’ll.

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There could also be things that rely on your rep rather than your actual alignment. Like, demonic or otherwise skills that rely on you being known as bad/good rather than actually being bad/good. I dunno.

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I have no idea if the Romance options are mainly limited by gender, but I kind of hope we have a few characters where either gender works. For example Xiwen or Tigress or Ai.

I also kind of hope I can eventually romance the Demon Queen’s son. It’ll probably have to happen very late in the game, the option for that.

Like, I’m thinking, once we’re really powerful and let’s say Mo Long eventually gets really strong, helps us destroy He Clan or take over He Clan or something and we can eventually help him either destroy his mother or something else of the sort, perhaps eventually learn his skill. I dunno.

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The author lives in Russia and any mention of LGBTQ+ can be considered extremest and could get the author in serious trouble so they had to remove any gay content from the story

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Ah, I see, understandable. Maybe once the game is complete someone could eventually mod that in. It does make some sense for the world the game is supposed to be set in as well, but it would be fun to get some LGBTQ+ options one day and if it is ever possible. It would be kind of interesting to have to struggle in that world to be accepted or to hide the relationship or end up becoming ultra-powerful to the point where nobody dares say anything. Or it would just be nice to have LGBTQ+ options that are fully accepted, either is good. lol

I walkthrough(ed)game three times, and at the first MC was captured and escaped by unclear way.  It's before coma event.

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So the ROs are strictly straight now?

i believe mei and tigress are not, but you cant be sure since the romances are not fleshed out yet.

though i believe Ruo is straight.

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Yeah, I feel like Ruo should be purely straight, makes sense for her/him to me, I don’t know why. It just feels right.

Although I kind of wish I could F/F with Ruo, it doesn’t feel like Ruo.

Mei feels like she could be both but I don’t think she would be. She would only accept your confession as a female if she needed you for something. Purely for the sake of manipulation.

Tigress I feel like she would be mainly straight but you could have a battle besties/friends with benefits relationship with her as a female, though nothing more.

Ai feels like you could be with her as a female.

Xiwen feels like you could be with him as a male.

I feel like for the same sex relationships it would be cool if when you’re confessing to eachother, depending on who, there’s a whole ‘I need to think about this’ situation.

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The author lives in Russia and any mention of LGBTQ+ can be considered extremest and could get the author in serious trouble so they had to remove any gay content from the stor

How do I export saves?

During the free roam parts of the game choose option labeled "Protected Save" and then the command to download the save file from there.

Ooh, okay, thanks

How big is muscular and how big is lean?

Entirely up to your imagination. In the past the choices would have impact on which attributes were easier to rise, but this was removed and the choice is now purely cosmetic.

is there a way to load the hard saves? i click on upload saves and pick the file but it does not load it.

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i believe you need to click upload save again after choosing the file, then it should either reload the save or it goes to the saved games at the top

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when the new update comes?

It's now updated to v. 0.14. Note, old saves won't be compatible because some of the systems were changed quite a bit.

Comrades, help, I made an account just for this one. No matter what I pick It ends with my spation thingy exploding and me dying D;
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Its because you kept the bomb Mei Mei gave you, you should have either used it or thrown it away when you had a chance, it even gave you a warning that if you were not gonna use it you should throw it away

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I don't understand why I can't choose anything else. It doesn't matter if I take the pill or not, this is the only thing I can select. Are the other two not written? I'm playing in browser if it matters.

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"Blow him up" requires MC to accept request they can get from Mei Mei before the expedition, if they're on good terms with her. The second option is only possible if you've refrained from using Golden Seed abilities while fighting Long Chen's underlings.

Oh okay, thank you.

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Been reading it on dashing, love it

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AHHHH I didn't know this game was also in itch.io lol im so happy to see it (a bit late, I know lol XD)

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Um excelente jogo, acho que uma das áreas onde poderia haver melhorias seria em free roam. Estávamos simplesmente muito ociosos. Por exemplo, a biblioteca deveria ter artes marciais e outras coisas a serem aprendidas, mais missões que permitiriam os famosos encontros casuais que nos dão power-ups baseados em heranças celestiais ou tesouros. Obrigado por me fornecer um jogo tão interessante.

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Is Yang Bohai the most powerful and most perverse Master or is it someone else?

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That would be elder Shouzi, the hidden elder of the sect. AKA, the Monkey God. He's the old man that was spying on women bathing in the river.

Yang Bohai is the bald muscle giant who is the second strongest elder in the sect.

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Is Hidden Elder Shouzi an alias for Master Roshi? >;3

I wouldn't be surprised if that's where the inspiration for his character came from.

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And yet, he teaches us how to finger bang (a Crane Hermit technique!) instead of palm thrust (THE Turtle Hermit technique!), go figure! XD

What does the premium version contain? 

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it's ahead by 2 updates. Right now that includes:
1) Mei Mei's big event (15k)

2) Auction (20k)

Should I pay to get rid of the black spot on my heart or not?

I'm playing a Virtuous & Honorable guy, in case it's a morality thing.

I'm mainly wondering if it's a waste of money or a drop in power.

Finally, I have to ask: Are there any ways to "adopt" a beast?

Having a bear sized warwolf sounds pretty badassed to me!

(Ai proceeds to bitchslap me senseless for saying that) >~<;

If you have regeneration and high vitality, it's better to leave the black spot alone. You'll get an additional talent if you just power through without any help.

I got poison resistance even though I used the meds.

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The only way to obtain poison resistance (in the game script) is through the option "Do nothing" (and sending Mei Mei away when she shows up) once the poison triggers. You'll need regen trait and 180 vitality to pass the check. If you buy the medicine earlier (for 500 points) or use the other paths once the outbreak happens you won't enter that script branch.

So, what you describe, is pretty much impossible. Are you sure you didn't confuse two or more of your playthroughs?

I might have, but either way, thank you for your answer, I appreciate your assistance.

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it's a good game but bear fucking god why wont it save in the fucking slot i chose

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why do I feel like I’ve made literally zero progress in romancing tang ruo even though I’ve pretty much maxed out her approval. I mean we are friendly enough towards each other but nothing as far as actual romance scenes or opportunities ever seem to come up. Am I missing something I’ve read the full demo (none boosty version) and done everything to impress and raise her approval yet I still feel like I’m no closer than the first comment I made about her liking what she sees. Should anything have happened yet at the point of where we are at in the story that somehow missed ? Or is it just really this slow ?

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Author just hasn't written any romantic scenes with Tang Ruo yet. Only characters who have gotten any major developments in the story are Tigress and Mei Mei, and Ai to a lesser extent.

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I appreciate the answer I was getting worried that I messed something up. I hope he hurry’s lol us ruo romancers are starving XD

How I feel about Ai, tbh.

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Also Tang Ruo reqiures you to be of the the opposite gender to be romanced, its in the code. The reasoning might be because their an heir of the empire.

she’s is the opposite gender she’s female and my mc is male 

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More Tang Ruo events pls!!!!Love this game!

TANG RUO AIN'T NUTHIN' TO FUCK WITH!!! XD

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Won't let me be gay 👎

edit: (leaving this original comment in case someone else is wondering why there isn’t lgbtq+ options)

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The author lives in Russia and any mention of LGBTQ+ can be considered extremest and could get the author in serious trouble so they had to remove any gay content from the story

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Oh, that’s depressing. At least they’re able to create the rest of the game, it’s very well made

😭then how the hell am i supposed to bed lushi (in a gay way

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Lushu is not a RO the author just felt like trollling us

🤧🤧now i feel like widower

I think that's because the Male Love Interest isn't fleshed out yet(Thats what you means by Gay, right?). My Female Char manage to fuck Tigress so Lesbian content exist at least.

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So, I just finished playing the game and I wanted to share my thoughts on the overall experience. Let me start by saying that this game definitely ranks in my top 10 best Choicescript games of all time. As someone who grew up watching a lot of classic martial arts movies and has an interest in Chinese mythology due to my Chinese grandad, this game is like a perfect love letter to those interests. It strongly reminds me of the Manhua martial peak, and the story has been enjoyable from start to finish in this version. There's also a good amount of content and some really impressive fighting scenes. 

Now, let's address a few areas that could use some improvement. First, the freeroam section is just okay. It's not anything special, mainly just training and buying talismans to get stronger. But right now, it feels a bit bare bones. I think it would be great if the freeroam section could also be a place where you can hang out with the main love interests and strengthen your bond. Currently, you only see them for a few important missions, and I'm personally focusing on romancing Mei Mei while also having Tang Ruo as my second choice. The tigress character seems to be the most developed in terms of romance, which is a bit disappointing. I hope the developer can make the freeroam more interactive in the future, allowing us to build relationships with other characters outside of the main story and side quests.

Lastly, I want to talk about a spoiler for those who haven't finished the current version. (Spoilers Ahead)

So basically, we all know that the main character is the reincarnation of Tang Wei, a literal God and the most powerful character in their world. One thing that has been bothering me is how slow the main character is progressing in terms of moving up in the realms. After being reborn by tang wei to true cultivation and going from mortal to middle houtain in terms of power in an instant, I expected the main character to level up much faster now, especially since they can absorb other martial artists to become stronger. But even after all that has happened, the main character is still stuck around the middle to late houtain level, which doesn't make sense to me. In my playthrough, I've reached max demon and have no problem with killing people, yet the main character still hasn't managed to break through to the next level. It's frustrating that even after absorbing the stone from the dragon cave, they didn't reach peak Houtain or above especially when Tang Wei himself said that these stones would greatly increase his powers. It feels like a major misstep. And even after everything they've done, the main character still hasn't reached Xiantian yet(Okay im reaching on this one but still). I understand that cultivation can take a long time, but considering the main character is a martial sovereign and the reincarnation of a God, it's surprising that they haven't reached the top yet at least by his generation.

At this point, the main character should have already surpassed Tang Ruo. Let's be honest, we all know that the only reason Tang is stronger than the main character is because she had the best training from birth and has a ton of overpowered artifacts and talismans. Even before reaching true cultivation, the main character could keep up with her. But even after discovering the truth about his origins and getting a huge power boost, the main character still feels weak compared to her. It's frustrating, especially since the main character wins most of the fights after ascending, but it still feels like he's barely scraping by. I play on the heaven exp trail(or something like that), so I make every single skill check, yet the main character still almost burns to death near the end when you fight the spear twins(Some fights simply give way to much trouble than it's worth even if you make the skill checks.) I understand that the story is far from complete and we're still early in the main character's life, but I really want to see some progress in his strength. At this point, I personally think the main character should be the strongest in his generation, but he's still second to Tang Ruo. If the author sees this, I'd love to hear their thoughts on everything I've said. I genuinely enjoy this story and I hope it stays on track and meets everyone's expectations.

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I understand that cultivation can take a long time, but considering the main character is a martial sovereign and the reincarnation of a God, it's surprising that they haven't reached the top yet at least by his generation.

The MC has only just woke up after 2 years in a coma. After which they have jumped from effectively mortal they were reduced to back to mid-houtian in something like a month. They're now expected to advance by 2 stages in mere 6 months which is already quite unprecedented feat. (other prominent members of the cast, Tang Ruo included, took those 2 years to reach late-houtian)

They might be reincarnation of a god but they're in a world where they're handicapped, if anything. I think you're being unreasonably impatient when you expect them to just jump to the next major power stage in matter of weeks, as if it didn't take other people decades if not more. That'd be just silly level of player's ego stroking.

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I think you're being unreasonably impatient when you expect them to just jump to the next major power stage in matter of weeks, as if it didn't take other people decades if not more. That'd be just silly level of player's ego stroking.

It seems to be a common sentiment for fans to question why we aren't instantly bulldozing everyone and leaving our competition in the dust. It isn't enough that we're within the top 2 of our generation, we also have to be able to beat everyone and everything without breaking a sweat. Not only that, but we also have to completely overtake Tang Ruo who's been training far longer, with better teachers, countless priceless artifacts, and has been juicing since they were a kid.

Personally, I like that not everyone can just be steamrolled. It enriches the world, provides stakes, and gives a sense of accomplishment whenever we actually fight and beat someone strong, like in the latest Boosty update.

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Thanks for your input, but it seems like you missed a big part of what I was saying, my friend. The only reason the main character isn't the strongest in the world is because the world he lives in isn't suitable for proper cultivation. Sure, the author has added their own twist to cultivation, but it still follows the general rules. Cultivation does take a ridiculously long time, but what you don't seem to understand is that the main character has a martial sovereign body, which is considered one of the most overpowered things in cultivation. On top of that, he's a reincarnation of a god. Now, I'm not saying he should instantly become a god or anything, because that would make the story less exciting. The main character is still in his early years, and the story will hopefully show his journey as he becomes an unbeatable force over the years. However, the problem is that he progresses way too slowly, especially when it comes to the stones. Tang Wei himself said that finding a few of these stones would instantly boost him to godhood or something along those lines, and killing martial artists makes you stronger by absorbing them. So far, we've only seen one stone boost the main character from a weak mortal to a middle houtain after a 2-year coma. That was a huge power boost. Now, you're telling me I'm being impatient when the main character has already found another stone after meeting the dragon girl, and his power boost is just a few dai strands? If we follow the logic that even the main character himself stated as well as tang wei, these stones should make him even stronger. By now, in the story, he's found 2 stones, so absorbing the second one should at least put him at peak houtain. I'm simply pointing out the plot holes I'm seeing, and it's not impatience to expect the main character to get stronger faster than everyone else. If you've read any cultivation stories or manhuas, you'd know that even the weakest cultivators with impurities, once they possess a martial body, will always be leagues above the rest.

I'm not here to argue, just sharing my opinions on things that I think should be addressed. It's okay if you don't agree with me. As someone who loves reading cultivation stories, I have a lot of insights on the subject. I'm just pointing out things that don't make sense to me in this story. Yes, I understand that the story isn't complete and the developer doesn't want us to become instantly stronger. However, the words in the story contradict the cultivation process itself. I won't be replying to this anymore because I've already said my piece. Continuing this discussion would be a waste of time. I just want to see this game succeed and hear the developer's thoughts on the issues I've raised. Remember, you didn't write this story, the developer did. So, no matter what you say, only the developer can correct my assumptions since they control the story flow. Have a good day.

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I'm not trying to argue with you, but I do want to bring attention to one thing.

If we follow the logic that even the main character himself stated as well as tang wei, these stones should make him even stronger. By now, in the story, he's found 2 stones, so absorbing the second one should at least put him at peak houtain. I'm simply pointing out the plot holes I'm seeing,

This is assuming two things:

1. That qi stones are all made equal. We don't really know this; the second qi stone may have just been less potent than the first.

2. That going from middle-Houtian to peak-Houtian takes the same amount of effort as going from mortal to middle-Houtian. It most likely isn't.

Take Tang Ruo for example. They enter early-Houtian a few days (or weeks) after entering the sect. Then they enter middle-Houtian right before the expo. This was over the course of several months. Now a 2.5-year time-skip happens, and they've only reached late-Houtian.

We know Tang Ruo never stopped training. So that could only mean the time, training, and power necessary to ascend to the next stage will take longer every "level up," so to speak.

That's it. Personally, it makes sense to me. Though, you likely know more about cultivation stories than me, and so if that runs contradictory to other xianxia tales, then that's fair criticism. Have a good day.

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Mhmm I wasnt referring to you my guy,was talking to the other guy but you did bring up some pretty good points so yeah for now I will just wait until more content so I can form a better opinion on the pacing,at least you aren't an asshole about it and you give geniuene good points.

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Are you playing the Boosty demo by any chance? If not, then MC makes some SERIOUS headway in terms of strength, so you have a lot to look forward to.

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However, the problem is that he progresses way too slowly,

I reiterate: it takes the MC 6 months tops to reach the stage others take years and often decades to achieve. Starting effectively from mortal level scratch. If this is your idea of "too slowly" then we simply have to agree to disagree on this.

Regarding the stones, Tang Wei needed a few of those to replenish his qi reserves and teleport out of the game world. But he's already a fully developed god-like being, not a fresh vessel which needs incomparably more qi to develop to his level. Also keep on mind that what your MC gets their hands on aren't the same stones, but tiny remnants of stop-gap solution produced by Tang Wei out of "mere" few millions of the world inhabitants. They're far from the same thing in terms of carried power.

Btw, each of the stones you get in the story grants you the same amount of power: 10 qi and 100 exp. The rest of exp you have available after the time skip doesn't come from the stone, but it's what you've accumulated as your character attributes up to that point. Perhaps it's a narrative mistake to make the first instance of getting your hands on one of these pebbles seem far more beneficial than it actually is.

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Yeah now that actually makes a bit more sense on regards to the stones but still I will stick to my opinion,Like I said I am not looking for any arguments simply just trying to figure out these weird plot holes I came across, hopefully the dev will clarify a few of my points for me. And yeah I did have a suspicion that not all the stones are the same power but still tang wei did say we only need a few of them and they are pretty rare.

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Yeah the problem is that the way the author frames the story makes the main character's lack of progression seem nonsensical. This is accentuated by the fact that we are capped by numbers that seem like artificially placed limits. My character is swimming in EXP and money - why can I not buy trainers, or pills, or whatever to get to Tang Ruo's level? I can't even learn other abilities cause we are capped at only a few. Tang Ruo is the same stage yet is able to progress at hyper-speed while my MC is sitting around doing nothing and can't even track TR's movements. If my MC is at max point level, max traits, max abilities, etc. for the stage, then what is the difference between the two? Is the MC not at the highest possible power for that stage? Cause there's literally nothing the MC can take/do to get more points since it's capped. Just seems so forced. 

And narratively, the story allowed my MC to have a solid 1 arena battle, with no ability to sign up for more. Meanwhile TR was plowing through the arena like it was nothing. Like???

I just don't get it. The narrative is confused, truly. There is really no convincing narrative reason why our MC can't be doing more to at least be COMPETITIVE with TR, as opposed to sitting around while being left in the dust (the current state of things). 

There are 10 year olds playing games, instruments, etc. at the levels of masters in the REAL WORLD. But a martial god is somehow unable to remain competitive with the woman he beat day 1? Makes NO sense. This narrative simultaneously wants the MC to be a super powerful martial entity while also being weak AF. Balance has not been properly achieved. 

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